I think just my overall structure needs a lot of work. I have the essay map at home which is helpful, I just need to put the time in (having Monday off will be helpful).
It's really easy for me to forget my argument while I'm skimming through my sources looking for a cite, which I think showed in my draft.
I was all over place in my intro and didn't mention my thesis until the second page.
I think my sources are great, but I just need to focus more on relaying that information in my paper.
I also need to add a lot more, I was only able to write about 2-3 pages for my first draft.
That sounds like a specific plan -- good! Keep working! ---Prof. Dragan
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